These are very rough images of Allen Sutton and Rhonda Lane after they convert to the monsters Rebecca made them. At least the last two are. The first are light sketches just playing around to get what I wanted. In the novel, I describe the creatures as things that can eat an entire human and regurgitate them fairly quickly. Of course with those incisors, it shouldn’t be too hard to do. The creatures eat people and spit them out new soldiers for Rebecca’s cult. I describe it in greater detail in the book. I felt I should draw them out to make it easier for me to visualize what they should look like. The first sketch I wasn’t sure which one I wanted to go with. I ended up going with the image on the bottom. My wife and son were my test subjects on which one was best. Although I felt I was going to use the bottom one, it helps to get some fresh eyes. Anyway, I’m still working on this novel, and now have some new inspiration to go forward.
Let me know which one you like best in the comment section below. Thanks for reading.
Edmund